I’m really not a fan of the way Nutbladder styled the narrator’s voice in this show (“Daga! Shikashi!” becomes “But! But!!!” and there are many sentences that aren’t actually sentences – ex. “As the seasons change!”). But I can see the argument to be made for Nutbladder. In this case, I’m willing to write it off as a “style” and not nag on it for this review, but it’s still enough to affect my opinion of the subs.
No OP this episode, just the ED. Yes, that’s just the English text. No karafags at Nutbladder.
No, you can’t just throw “suddenly” in a sentence and expect it to raise dramatic tension. Throwing it ’round willy-nilly leads to shit writing.
Okay, I can understand wanting to start a new sentence here, but this is just stupid. There’s no reason they can’t be connected together considering the second “sentence” isn’t even really one.
The devil’s night? Excuse me, what? How about “that hellish night” or something? If you insist upon “devil”, at least remember that you capitalized it before to refer to some guy, so call it “the Devil’s night” (even though that makes no fucking sense). If you’re going to fuck up, at least do it consistently.
Endoh, who had entered Kanji in -blah blah blah-, lost his position when Kaiji failed. He was then assigned to -blah blah blah-
Combo! First off, it’s hostage (singular). Secondly, if you make a line end with a comma, you damned well better finish off the sentence, not start a new one.
If I could just get out of here for one day, I’d be able to figure something out.
Yeah. These guys really don’t understand how to talk about events in the future.
If I got out, I could make it to a track or even an illegal casino…
There are some instances where “who” is plural, but this is not one of them. He’s referencing himself here,
Commas are important.
Ever heard of word overuse? ._.
it. When will he realize it.
Overall grade: C+
Watchable. Also, there’s no sound in the preview. lol