You guys, this has more errors than gg’s did. *sigh* Time to review Kata-Subs.
Edit: Apparently this release used the wrong script, aka the unedited script. Oh my. Looks like someone’s getting hanged.
No OP in this episode, but here’s the ED.
-“more of a devil.”
+”closer to devils.”
Devil is singular.
If you want to style a title in all lowercase, that’s fine. My problem lies with this line running from a comma into the beginning of a new sentence. :/
see, not saw. Teehee, see-saw.
Shut up, will you?
You’d make me blush like a little schoolgirl if you used “ya”, though.
Yukino, the younger brother, has good grades, he’s a good athlete,
Of course, you’ll have to pay.
Either do OK or okay. Never ok. Why? Fuck if I know, I’m only a Sage, not a rulemaker.
whom. Oh yeah, I went there.
If that doesn’t help, then it’s time for us, the Exorcists.
Yes, I’m that anal.
much, you see.
May I do that for a bit?
Alternatively, you could use “Can I do that for a bit?”, but I prefer to avoid using can where may is supposed to go. :X
Pretty sure someone shilling noodles isn’t gonna be saying they’re only “good”.
There’s a reason why people don’t go, “Sup bitches? I’m a mediocre lover. Let’s fuck!”
Pancake sauce? Really? REALLLLYYYY?!
The staff meeting
out for a bit
– “as well”
This sentence probably needs a period
“a bit of graze”? Is this some British English phrase?
We just call it a PTO in America. Even if that’s what it’s called in the UK, capitalize it. Parent Teacher Regularity Committee.
make a fool
fungi = plural of fungus
So use fungus.
Devil? More like, what do you mean I’ve got to hide?
Overall grade: D-
You were more watchable than gg’s 01, but since they v2’d it, I’m gonna have to say gg has the better release.