Okay, yeah. This seems to be the best release for Kamisama Dolls.
File size: 355 MKV (HQ MKV), 199 MB (LQ MKV)
She was referred to as “your daughter” in the previous line. Using it here is redundant and hurts the flow of the lines. Try
“Is she doing well?”
Line was way too long for the allotted time.
Why is Seki capitalized and kakashi not? Seems like an arbitrary choice to me.
Protip: The same person can’t say two different lines at the same time. Fix your timing.
Italics for “do” to properly reflect how the accent on the word that would be used in natural speech.
She’s asking why the person who saved her didn’t report the fire. “I guess so…” is not a valid answer.
I know what they mean because I’m wapanese. But for those that aren’t, this sentene will read like shit. Redo it, kthx.
Overall grade: B+
The errors were mostly minor and irrelevant to the work as a whole. I see no reason to not watch Doki’s, unless you absolutely despise British English.