Translation Review: [Kokona] Ijime OAD

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Table of Contents

Release Information

Translation

Other Observations

Final Grade

Release Information

Episode details.

Release format: MKV (173MB, 8-bit)

Wap Level: Full Wap

English style: American English.

Speed: Slow (released last August)

 

External links.

Group website: None I can see

IRC channel: None

 

Translation

Karaoke.

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_12.13_[2014.04.01_20.18.18]

Kinda hard to karaoke a piano piece.

Main Script.

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_03.56_[2014.03.31_19.53.15]

“Thanks to my parents’ generous donations, the teachers aren’t disobeying me either.”  This is an example of an error that will greatly affect the audience’s understanding of the story.

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_04.46_[2014.03.31_19.53.33]

She said kizutsuketa baggu meaning “damaged bag” and she said benshou shimasu which is the present/future tense of “compensate.”

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_04.59_[2014.03.31_19.54.11]

I interpreted yogoreteshimatta as “stained by your tears.”

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_05.15_[2014.03.31_20.02.55]

Missed this yadaaa.

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_05.54_[2014.03.31_20.12.31]

Guess this is more of a nitpick, but it’s actually “We have to sell this house as well.”

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_07.23_[2014.03.31_20.15.18]

Zama miro does not mean “you’re a nuisance.” Ever.

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_10.18_[2014.03.31_20.22.49]

Actually it’s “I’m the same as her,” but in the grand scheme of things, it’s not that different, is it?

 

 

Other Observations

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_00.04_[2014.04.01_20.19.25]

This release actually had halfway decent typesetting coming from a relatively unknown group.

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_05.00_[2014.03.31_19.55.11][Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_05.01_[2014.03.31_19.55.20]

Commie, Anime-Koi, what have you wrought on us?

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_10.40_[2014.03.31_20.23.26][Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_10.42_[2014.03.31_20.23.47]

I thought the cool thing to do nowadays was to \t transform to white.

[Kokona] Ijime OAD [8F5AD6F0].mkv_snapshot_05.37_[2014.03.31_20.04.04]

I couldn’t help thinking “Just like a plan.”

Final Grade: C+

A few too many errors for this 12-minute OAD. If this were a full-length episode, it might have pushed the grade into the B range, especially since I thought it was edited reasonably well.

 

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