Worst offender (for me) was- “I was scolding you because you risked your own life so lightly.”

Simply terrible.

I somehow feel trolled ;_;

>instead. “I should have died instead!”
Worthless piece of shit!
I should have died!
a) He actually *is* frustrated he didn’t die *because* he is a “worthless piece of shit!”
b) he is talking to himself here (we’ll get to this later on too)

> They-They 1st beef (leading to confusion)
Second line is: blah blah “they” encountered “a group of Titans” – I don’t see how that would confuse anyone, since “group WeAreFucked” encountered “a group of Titans”.

> The use of “for good” here indicates he was following a statement or sentiment that included “shut up”.
> I think what Lag-Taka wanted to go for was “If you keep talking like that, I may just have to shut you up… for good!”
No, not necessarily. Btw same could be said for your suggestion, let alone audio length doesn’t match all that blabbering. (02:46.26 – 02:48.48)

> Lag-Taka’s “Yeah.” here is the biggest issue, because there’s no reason for Connie to respond with that.
Pay attention: He is *not* replying to Christa. Basically he is just talking to himself out loud here, so: “Yeah. etc etc” is fine. You know, he is trying to keep it together and all.

> he is kneeling
No he is not. He is resting his sorry ass on his knees, and therefore, he is sitting.

> Do you even tense?
Yes we do. On the other hand, you seem a bit confused today. You *would* die for your country. You are not dying *because* of it.

> Unless Mikasa is a time traveler, this is wrong. Try “Our family has practiced the art of embroidery for many generations.”
I think it actually is *this* (specific) embroidery. Although yes, we should have used something like “this style/technique of embroidery.”

> They-They 2nd beef
They would have been gone by the time the Military Police got here!
They wouldn’t have made it in time!
- This could be avoided yes, but I think it’s not really that confusing if you are actually *watching* the anime. I could be wrong though.

> By repeating “home”, Lag-Taka is essentially having Mikasa say “I no longer have a home, because I don’t have a home.”
No. By repeating “home” we add more drama to it (and we all love drama, don’t we?) + that’s a child there in case you haven’t noticed. They tend to talk like that in general.

> “I’m a worthless piece of shit!” (This isn’t properly addressed.)
Now, now. If you weren’t looking so hard for “C mistakes” you wouldn’t repeat your own!
Armin isn’t actually talking to anyone here. He is just cursing at himself. In his state, “I am a” is not rly needed now, is it?

> Fear not, Lag-Taka fans. Ignoring the other issues, this group does Shingeki justice.
I loved this. However, posting consecutive screens like that makes it look really bad when it’s not if you actually *just* watch the ep itself.

In short, a script of this level doesn’t justify a “C” nor a ragequit. Personally, I think that you quit because you are a lazy-ass that won’t even bother with his own group’s stuff! (finish Hyobu kthx.)

These two as well.

It’s funny because Hatsu credits translator on their site.