Enjoy your pseudo-English subs.
File size: 303 MB
Release format: MKV
Japanesiness: Japanese name order. Other than that, none.
Karaoke: No. The OP/ED/Insert weren’t translated.
Typesetting. It varies from okay to not okay.
God vs. god
Okay, here’s a hard-and-steady rule for when to capitalize “god”.
Capitalize “god” when: you’re using it as a proper name. Think of replacing “god” with “Jehova” or “Jim” and see if it makes sense. That’s it.
Ex: “Jim has spoken to me.” | “God has spoken to me.”
Otherwise, you’re using it in a more general sense, so don’t fucking capitalize it.
Ex: “My god has spoken to me.” |
“My Jim has spoken to me.”
Honestly, I shouldn’t have to go over this. This was part of my coursework in elementary school.
Use question marks when you have a question. Don’t use question marks when you don’t.
It’s in the fucking name of the punctuation mark. How do you fuck this up?
A comma splice is when you have two sentences that read just fine by themselves, but then you decide to be dick-in-meat-grinder retarded and randomly add a comma between them. Fuck everything about that.
“Put chili oil”? Put it where?
a few months to live. You need the indirect article here.
those who have
Three-liners are forbidden.
Penguins in general? No, they’re talking about the ones in the zoo. Therefore, it’s gotta be “like the penguins are going to”
Capitalization issues. It should be “Mom” and “Uncle Ikebe”
lol’d for a third time. Miso soup; not miso group, guys.
Again, you need the indirect article “A”. Also, this is a comma splice.
The tenses are super fucked-up here.
This doesn’t really seem like a nickname people would have.
Not “the fate”. Try “his fate”.
If you’re going to continue from a comma, you better have your next line in lowercase.
Overall grade: D-
gg is not a good group. How many times must I repeat this for people to understand? Avoid this release if you can.