I had to watch four episodes of this show prior to this review. Pity me.
Release format: MKV (8-bit, 488 MB), MKV (10-bit, 377 MB)
Japanesiness: Honorifics. Japanese name order.
Opening. The text for the k-timing queues at the top and then drops down. I can understand the novelty potential here, but why on earth was this actually greenlit?
Ending. Much better than the opening. The kara was really suitable for the ending song. “Soft” is the first word that pops to mind, but again, this is complimentary to the song that’s playing.
Why go so far as to make the overlap font an entirely different size than the regular one? Looks bad.
on the school grounds
Now, unfortunately, I can’t think of the rule that makes this wrong and I don’t feel like making shit up just to seem smart. In cases like these, it’s smart to check how most people say it. From there, we can deduce if it’s actually a mistake or simply Dark_Sage losing his mind.
1 result on Google for “incidents in school grounds”
15,600 results for “incidents on school grounds”
2 results for “incidents in the school grounds” (one of which is to Hiryuu’s script)
14,000 results for “incidents on the school grounds”
“I’ll move your budget request to the top of our list for the time being.”
These sentences don’t even seem related. Change the second line to “H-Have I really?”
This reads like a list. This is not a list.
“Act like the pathetic idiot you are:
stay still and watch!”
Swear to god I’ve fucking had it. Every other editor fucks this up. I’d execute you all for crimes against English if I could.
Senpai is capitalized here because it’s being used in place of Haru’s real fucking name, and this lesbo here is all “Kyaa, Senpai-chan!” all the fucking time. To her, this is a main term of address for Haru. So fucking capitalize it.
Am I going to have to make an article on this? I think I am. Why has it come to this?
“Haruko-senpai” is actually what she says.
Overall grade: B
I liked this script in that I liked the mistakes. I had to actually think as to why some of them were wrong. This reviewer’s fun aside, the script’s all right as is the typesetting. Wasn’t a fan of the OP karaoke, but the ED kara made up for it. Solid B.