With repetition, it’s still gotta be “Tell me, tell me.” No need to emphasize the “me” part.
As I keep whining about, it should be all right. “Alright” is only accepted some places, but “all right” is accepted everywhere.
“A difference between death and… death?!”
“Both paths lead to death?!”
or y’know, something else that gets the concept across. This just doesn’t work.
Overall grade: A-
They did a great job. I think these are the guys to get for A-Channel, even more than evetaku or Doki. But if you really like karaoke, please note that these guys keep it pretty plain in style.