Fail-15 vs. R-15. Which is worse?
File size: 315 MB
Release format: MKV
Font: I kid you not. When the first line popped up on the screen, I recoiled in horror, uttered a “WTF is this shit”, clicked out of the video, then set my computer on fire. But then I remembered I had a duty to review this for you. That sacred oath which I previously swore must be upheld! So, I soldiered on through the craven pinkness, less of a man than I was before so that you may know which group sucked the least on the shittiest show of the season.
Typesetting. I liked it.
Here’s a hint to help you remember how to phrase things like this: Replace the plural with another plural. I like men. Well, I don’t actually like men. I like the word in its use for this example, and– Okay, fuck it. Moving on.
teachers -> men
So, this would read “Come with me to the men room for a moment.” Obviously, that’s not gonna fly. You need to show ownership here and make it men’s room. Similarly, this line should be teachers’ room.
“in the public”? How about just “in public”
I hope she was able practice, too.
a my draft, huh? Oh, Fail-15~
it’s = it is
its = its (ownership)
Watchability: Watchable. It’s not like you’re watching this show for the amazing dialogue.
Overall grade: B-
Some pretty significant mistakes, the font, and a lack of karaoke lead me to recommend NotSoHorrible for this show.