MFW I watched the last three episodes of this series.
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Release format: MKV (324MB, 10-bit)
Wap Level: Almost full wap (calls eroge “erotic games,” etc.)
English style: American English.
Speed: Slow (>48 hours)
Group website: http://evetaku.com/
IRC channel:#[email protected]
ED. Nothing to complain about. Also liked the way they interpreted the lyrics.
Using “sporty” in place of “the athletic type” sounds like too much of a Briticism. To my eyes, it looks like he’s talking about her personality rather than her actual physical abilities.
She’s actually saying “Ahh…” as in “Say ahh…”
Tamaki didn’t actually mention anything about them fighting, she just said “Did something happen between them.” I would think of another line which would make Tamaki sound more oblivious of the situation, but this is an acceptable adaptation. Also, too, it’s supposed to be “He and Onee-chan.” You don’t say “Did him have a fight?” you college-ass, tie-wearing motherfuckers.
“You no longer have the right to number yourself among the dark brethren.”
Kirino says “baka” three times, and not once did Evetaku use the word “stupid” or the like. Now that’s being inventive :3
Forgot the “Chrisumasu” at the lower left. They kept the positioning of the word “Christmas” consistent with other scenes.
The word choppiri does not mean “super.” Look it up.
I was thinking “A Merry Manmeat Christmas,” but I guess it can’t be helped.
<High-pitched voice> Looove it!
He said omae, singular. That means he’s only speaking to
I don’t know, the way they phrased it which opens up the possibility of another wincest pairing warms my cockles.
A perfectly acceptable use of “can’t help it” for shouganai.
They went for a two centisecond blink in the timing when trying to separate the two instances where she says “Gross!” I would have just had the first line say “Gross…”, link the two lines and called it a day.
Final Grade: A-
A few mistakes aside, this is a very good script; you aren’t dealing with amateur dialogue writers here. This is easily recommended if you don’t like Horriblesubs’ lack of kara and typesets or if you have something against Commie’s localizations.