Translation Party: [Commie vs FFF vs Kaylith vs NFP-IS] Zankyou no Terror (Episode 01)

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Zankyou no Terror – Episode 01

Comparisons: 7 or 13

Participants:

Commie

FFF

Kaylith

NFP-IS

Codes:

{\i1} indicates the start of italics

{\i0} indicates the close of italics

 

 

 

Essential 1.

This is just a theory, but I think 12 knew what bullying was before this scene.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Essential 01

Commie :: Hey, whatcha doin’?
>Huh?
>>Wh-What’s up with him?
Oh, I know!
{\i1}This{\i0} is what they call “bullying”!

FFF :: Hey, what’re you guys doing?
>What?
>>Where’d that guy come from?
Oh, I’ve got it!
So {\i1}this{\i0} is what they call “bullying”!

Kaylith :: Hey, what’s up?
>Huh?
>>What’s this guy’s deal?
Oh, I get it! This must be bullying!

NFP-IS :: Hey, what are you doing?
>Huh…?
>>W-What’s up with him?
Oh, I know! This is the so called “bullying”!

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Essential 2.

Lisa in uguu mode.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Essential 02

Commie :: On a hot summer day, I saw…
a smile as warm as the sun,
and a gaze as cold as ice.

FFF :: It was on a hot summer day that I saw a smile as warm as the sun,
and a gaze as cold as ice.

Kaylith :: On that hot summer day,
I met a smile as warm as sunshine,
and a gaze as cold as ice.

NFP-IS :: That was a smile like the sun…
…on a hot summer day…
with eyes like ice.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Essential 3.

Bossy boss being bossy.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Essential 03

Commie :: You’re not getting paid to chat and watch YouTube videos.

FFF :: Didn’t I tell you two not to fool around during work hours?

Kaylith :: Quit screwing around while you’re still on the clock.

NFP-IS :: You’re still on the clock, stop messing around!

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Essential 4.

Conflict so early in the show? You’re spoiling us, Japan~

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Essential 04

Commie :: Chow’s it goin’?
>Twelve, people are already talking about you.
>I thought I told you to lay low.
Hey, I’m not the only one they’re talking about.
>That’s not true.

FFF :: Captain on deck!
>Twelve.
>The entire school’s talking about you.
>Didn’t I tell you not to draw attention to yourself?
Look who’s talking, Mr. Popular.
>That’s not true.

Kaylith :: Chow’s it goin’?
>You’re already making waves around here, Twelve.
>I thought I told you to lay low.
I’m not the only one making waves, you know.
>That’s not true.

NFP-IS :: How’s it going ?
>Twelve, people are already gossiping about you. I thought I told you to lay low.
What about you? People are talking about you too.
>That’s not true.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Essential 5.

It’s just a hunch, but I bet this won’t be the last time we’ll see Lisa.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Essential 05

Commie :: It’s Mishima Lisa.
She has her lunch with her.
Ya think she’ll eat in the john?
>Quit being so nosy.
Aye, aye!

FFF :: It’s Mishima Lisa.
She’s carrying a lunch box.
Is she going to eat on the toilet?
>Don’t get involved.
Aye, aye!

Kaylith :: That’s Mishima Lisa.
She’s got her lunch with her.
Planning to eat in the bathroom?
>It’s none of your concern.
Yeah, yeah…

NFP-IS :: It’s Mishima Lisa.
She has her bento with her.
Planning to eat in the bathroom, maybe?
>Don’t stick your nose into this.
Aye, aye!

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Essential 6.

Masterful plot twist. Well done, anime.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Essential 06

Commie :: Is everything going according to plan?
>There’s one thing we didn’t expect.
>Mishima Lisa.
>She saw me.
>That’s why I left her behind.

FFF :: All according to plan?
>No, there was one thing we didn’t expect.
>Mishima Lisa.
>She saw me.
>So I left her inside.

Kaylith :: Is everything going according to plan?
>Not exactly. There’s one thing we didn’t count on.
>Mishima Lisa.
>She saw me.
>That’s why I left her behind.

NFP-IS :: Is everything going according to plan?
>Actually, there’s one thing we didn’t expect.
>Mishima Lisa.
>I found her by accident.
>So I left her behind.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Essential 7.

Continues the prior comparison’s conversation.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Essential 07

Commie :: She’d probably die if she was on her own, so I left a Kururin with her.
We can either kill her now with the press of a button,
or we can save her from being consumed by the flames.

FFF :: If we do nothing, she’ll just die.
But I also gave her a Kururin, just in case.
We can kill her any time, or we can save her…
from the blazing flames.

Kaylith :: She’d probably die on her own anyway, but I left a Kururin with her for now.
We could kill her right now if we wanted to,
or we could save her from the raging fire.

NFP-IS :: If left alone, she will probably die so I left a Kururin with her for now.
So we can kill her in an instant if we want…
…or we can save her from the midst of the burning flames.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

 

Decision Point:

  1. 7 ain’t enough. Probably. Not sure. (Kay, click the spoiler and keep reading then.)
  2. I dunno, 13 comparisons is a lot. That’s like 13 comparisons. (Good point. Head down to the results.)

 

Spoiler for

Expanded 1.

Oh 12, u so free-spirited and independent. I can relate, so I like this show.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Extended 01

Commie :: Listen, Twelve, don’t do anything to stand out.
Try acting like a normal student.
>Oh, it’s Kururin!
>Isn’t he cute? His bangs look like ant antennae.
>I love ants!
Are you even listening to me?

FFF :: Listen here, Twelve.
Don’t draw attention to yourself.
Try your best to act like a normal student.
>Hey! It’s Kururin!
>It sure is cute.
>It’s like an ant with those antennas.
>I love ants.
Are you even listening?

Kaylith :: Listen, Twelve. Don’t draw attention to yourself.
Just blend in with the other students as best you can.
>Look, it’s Kururin!
>His bangs are like ant antennae. Cute, right?
>I love ants.
Are you even paying attention?

NFP-IS :: Listen Twelve, don’t do anything that stands out.
Try to act like a normal student as much as you can.
>Oh, it’s Kururin!
>Isn’t he cute? His bangs look like ant antennas.
>I love ants!
Did you hear what I said?

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Expanded 2.

The two MCs moonlight as meteorologists.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Extended 02

Commie :: It’s kind of sudden, but here’s tomorrow’s weather forecast.
>Tokyo will be enveloped in darkness after 3 PM.
These big ol’ sparks are gonna fly all over the Shinjuku area!
>Be careful when you leave the house.
Well then, everyone, have a nice day!

FFF :: Let’s jump to tomorrow’s weather forecast.
>After 3 p.m. Tokyo will be enveloped in darkness.
Huge sparks are likely to fly in some parts of Shinjuku.
>Please be careful not to die if you’re going outside.
And with this, we wish you all a pleasant day.

Kaylith :: Anyway, there’s been a sudden change in the weather forecast for tomorrow.
>Expect darkness to descend on Tokyo sometime after 3 PM.
Big sparks are gonna shower all over Shinjuku!
>Use caution when leaving your homes.
That’s that. Have a nice day, people!

NFP-IS :: This is kind of sudden but here’s tomorrow’s weather forecast.
>Tokyo will be enveloped by darkness after 3 p.m.
Large sparks will fly, scattering around the Shinjuku area.
>Use caution when leaving the house.
Well then everyone, have a nice day!

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Expanded 3.

Whoa, nightmares? Do they have a troubled past? Man, I feel such sympathy for the two sociopathic MCs now. Sob sob.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Extended 03

Commie :: Did you have that nightmare again?
I thought you would.
>Huh?
Mishima Lisa has eyes like those kids at the institution.
Don’t ya think?

FFF :: Did you have that dream again?
I had a feeling you would.
Mishima Lisa has almost the same look in her eyes as the other children in the orphanage.
Don’t you think so?

Kaylith :: Did you have that dream again?
Something told me you would.
>Huh?
Mishima Lisa’s eyes are just like the kids’ from the institution.
Don’t you think?

NFP-IS :: Did you have that dream again?
I thought you would.
>Huh?
Because Mishima Lisa has eyes like those kids at the institution.
Don’t you agree?

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Expanded 4.

This is definitely something they never talked about before and totes need to get figured out now.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Extended 04

Commie :: We have 26 minutes until the generators kick in and the electricity restores.
>Roger that!
Did you memorize the floor layouts?
>Who do you think I am?

FFF :: We have 26 minutes until the backup generator kicks in and restores power.
>Roger!
Did you memorize the floor layouts?
>Do you even need to ask?

Kaylith :: We’ll have 26 minutes before the generators flip the power back on.
>Roger that!
Got the floor plan memorized?
>What do you take me for?

NFP-IS :: 26 minutes until the power generators kick in and electricity is restored.
>Roger!
You remember the plan?
>Who do you think you’re talking to?

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Expanded 5.

I know the show’s trying to be super deep and cool, but it’s really hard to believe that emo-chan is so complacent that she’d just take the situation as an “Oh whateves, that works for me.” kinda deal.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Extended 05

Commie :: Fancy seeing you here.
Are you playing hide and seek?
I’ll let you borrow this.
It gets lonely when you hide by yourself.
>U-Um, this is—
Promise me…
that you won’t let go of him until I say you can.

FFF :: What are you doing here?
Were you playing hide-and-seek?
I’ll lend you this.
Hiding by yourself can get pretty lonely.
>Um… this…
Promise me something.
That you’ll carry it with you until I say otherwise.

Kaylith :: What brings you to a place like this?
Playing a little hide-and-seek?
I’ll let you hold onto this.
It must get lonely, hiding all by yourself.
>Um, well…
Promise me something.
Don’t let go of him until I say so, okay?

NFP-IS :: What are you doing in a place like this?
Are you playing hide and seek?
I’ll let you borrow this.
Because it’s lonely hiding by yourself.
>U-Um, this is…
Promise me…
…that you won’t let go of him until I say you can.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

Expanded 6.

What a choice.

Audio:

Zankyou no Terror Extended 06

Commie :: Listen, you do one of two things.
You can make that building your grave,
or you can become an accomplice.

FFF :: Listen, you have two options.
Either you die where you stand,
or you become our accomplice.

Kaylith :: Listen. You have two options.
You can die where you stand,
or become our accomplice.

NFP-IS :: Listen, you have two options:
You can die where you are,
or become an accomplice.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

 

 

 

 

 

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Which group had which line (unformatted, lazy-mode Sage):

Spoiler for

Essential 1.

This is just a theory, but I think 12 knew what bullying was before this scene.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/Zankyou01.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Essential 01

Commie :: Hey, whatcha doin’?
>Huh?
>>Wh-What’s up with him?
Oh, I know!
{\i1}This{\i0} is what they call “bullying”!

FFF :: Hey, what’re you guys doing?
>What?
>>Where’d that guy come from?
Oh, I’ve got it!
So {\i1}this{\i0} is what they call “bullying”!

Kaylith :: Hey, what’s up?
>Huh?
>>What’s this guy’s deal?
Oh, I get it! This must be bullying!

NFP-IS :: Hey, what are you doing?
>Huh…?
>>W-What’s up with him?
Oh, I know! This is the so called “bullying”!

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Essential 2.

Lisa in uguu mode.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/Zankyou02.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Essential 02

Commie :: On a hot summer day, I saw…
a smile as warm as the sun,
and a gaze as cold as ice.

FFF :: It was on a hot summer day that I saw a smile as warm as the sun,
and a gaze as cold as ice.

Kaylith :: On that hot summer day,
I met a smile as warm as sunshine,
and a gaze as cold as ice.

NFP-IS :: That was a smile like the sun…
…on a hot summer day…
with eyes like ice.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Essential 3.

Bossy boss being bossy.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/Zankyou03.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Essential 03

Commie :: You’re not getting paid to chat and watch YouTube videos.

FFF :: Didn’t I tell you two not to fool around during work hours?

Kaylith :: Quit screwing around while you’re still on the clock.

NFP-IS :: You’re still on the clock, stop messing around!

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Essential 4.

Conflict so early in the show? You’re spoiling us, Japan~

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/Zankyou04.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Essential 04

Commie :: Chow’s it goin’?
>Twelve, people are already talking about you.
>I thought I told you to lay low.
Hey, I’m not the only one they’re talking about.
>That’s not true.

FFF :: Captain on deck!
>Twelve.
>The entire school’s talking about you.
>Didn’t I tell you not to draw attention to yourself?
Look who’s talking, Mr. Popular.
>That’s not true.

Kaylith :: Chow’s it goin’?
>You’re already making waves around here, Twelve.
>I thought I told you to lay low.
I’m not the only one making waves, you know.
>That’s not true.

NFP-IS :: How’s it going ?
>Twelve, people are already gossiping about you. I thought I told you to lay low.
What about you? People are talking about you too.
>That’s not true.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Essential 5.

It’s just a hunch, but I bet this won’t be the last time we’ll see Lisa.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/Zankyou05.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Essential 05

Commie :: It’s Mishima Lisa.
She has her lunch with her.
Ya think she’ll eat in the john?
>Quit being so nosy.
Aye, aye!

FFF :: It’s Mishima Lisa.
She’s carrying a lunch box.
Is she going to eat on the toilet?
>Don’t get involved.
Aye, aye!

Kaylith :: That’s Mishima Lisa.
She’s got her lunch with her.
Planning to eat in the bathroom?
>It’s none of your concern.
Yeah, yeah…

NFP-IS :: It’s Mishima Lisa.
She has her bento with her.
Planning to eat in the bathroom, maybe?
>Don’t stick your nose into this.
Aye, aye!

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Essential 6.

Masterful plot twist. Well done, anime.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/Zankyou06.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Essential 06

Commie :: Is everything going according to plan?
>There’s one thing we didn’t expect.
>Mishima Lisa.
>She saw me.
>That’s why I left her behind.

FFF :: All according to plan?
>No, there was one thing we didn’t expect.
>Mishima Lisa.
>She saw me.
>So I left her inside.

Kaylith :: Is everything going according to plan?
>Not exactly. There’s one thing we didn’t count on.
>Mishima Lisa.
>She saw me.
>That’s why I left her behind.

NFP-IS :: Is everything going according to plan?
>Actually, there’s one thing we didn’t expect.
>Mishima Lisa.
>I found her by accident.
>So I left her behind.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Essential 7.

Continues the prior comparison’s conversation.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/Zankyou07.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Essential 07

Commie :: She’d probably die if she was on her own, so I left a Kururin with her.
We can either kill her now with the press of a button,
or we can save her from being consumed by the flames.

FFF :: If we do nothing, she’ll just die.
But I also gave her a Kururin, just in case.
We can kill her any time, or we can save her…
from the blazing flames.

Kaylith :: She’d probably die on her own anyway, but I left a Kururin with her for now.
We could kill her right now if we wanted to,
or we could save her from the raging fire.

NFP-IS :: If left alone, she will probably die so I left a Kururin with her for now.
So we can kill her in an instant if we want…
…or we can save her from the midst of the burning flames.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Expanded 1.

Oh 12, u so free-spirited and independent. I can relate, so I like this show.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/ZankyouE01.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Extended 01

Commie :: Listen, Twelve, don’t do anything to stand out.
Try acting like a normal student.
>Oh, it’s Kururin!
>Isn’t he cute? His bangs look like ant antennae.
>I love ants!
Are you even listening to me?

FFF :: Listen here, Twelve.
Don’t draw attention to yourself.
Try your best to act like a normal student.
>Hey! It’s Kururin!
>It sure is cute.
>It’s like an ant with those antennas.
>I love ants.
Are you even listening?

Kaylith :: Listen, Twelve. Don’t draw attention to yourself.
Just blend in with the other students as best you can.
>Look, it’s Kururin!
>His bangs are like ant antennae. Cute, right?
>I love ants.
Are you even paying attention?

NFP-IS :: Listen Twelve, don’t do anything that stands out.
Try to act like a normal student as much as you can.
>Oh, it’s Kururin!
>Isn’t he cute? His bangs look like ant antennas.
>I love ants!
Did you hear what I said?

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Expanded 2.

The two MCs moonlight as meteorologists.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/ZankyouE02.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Extended 02

Commie :: It’s kind of sudden, but here’s tomorrow’s weather forecast.
>Tokyo will be enveloped in darkness after 3 PM.
These big ol’ sparks are gonna fly all over the Shinjuku area!
>Be careful when you leave the house.
Well then, everyone, have a nice day!

FFF :: Let’s jump to tomorrow’s weather forecast.
>After 3 p.m. Tokyo will be enveloped in darkness.
Huge sparks are likely to fly in some parts of Shinjuku.
>Please be careful not to die if you’re going outside.
And with this, we wish you all a pleasant day.

Kaylith :: Anyway, there’s been a sudden change in the weather forecast for tomorrow.
>Expect darkness to descend on Tokyo sometime after 3 PM.
Big sparks are gonna shower all over Shinjuku!
>Use caution when leaving your homes.
That’s that. Have a nice day, people!

NFP-IS :: This is kind of sudden but here’s tomorrow’s weather forecast.
>Tokyo will be enveloped by darkness after 3 p.m.
Large sparks will fly, scattering around the Shinjuku area.
>Use caution when leaving the house.
Well then everyone, have a nice day!

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Expanded 3.

Whoa, nightmares? Do they have a troubled past? Man, I feel such sympathy for the two sociopathic MCs now. Sob sob.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/ZankyouE03.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Extended 03

Commie :: Did you have that nightmare again?
I thought you would.
>Huh?
Mishima Lisa has eyes like those kids at the institution.
Don’t ya think?

FFF :: Did you have that dream again?
I had a feeling you would.
Mishima Lisa has almost the same look in her eyes as the other children in the orphanage.
Don’t you think so?

Kaylith :: Did you have that dream again?
Something told me you would.
>Huh?
Mishima Lisa’s eyes are just like the kids’ from the institution.
Don’t you think?

NFP-IS :: Did you have that dream again?
I thought you would.
>Huh?
Because Mishima Lisa has eyes like those kids at the institution.
Don’t you agree?

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Expanded 4.

This is definitely something they never talked about before and totes need to get figured out now.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/ZankyouE04.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Extended 04

Commie :: We have 26 minutes until the generators kick in and the electricity restores.
>Roger that!
Did you memorize the floor layouts?
>Who do you think I am?

FFF :: We have 26 minutes until the backup generator kicks in and restores power.
>Roger!
Did you memorize the floor layouts?
>Do you even need to ask?

Kaylith :: We’ll have 26 minutes before the generators flip the power back on.
>Roger that!
Got the floor plan memorized?
>What do you take me for?

NFP-IS :: 26 minutes until the power generators kick in and electricity is restored.
>Roger!
You remember the plan?
>Who do you think you’re talking to?

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Expanded 5.

I know the show’s trying to be super deep and cool, but it’s really hard to believe that emo-chan is so complacent that she’d just take the situation as an “Oh whateves, that works for me.” kinda deal.

Audio: [mp3t track=”http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/ZankyouE05.mp3″ play=”Start audio” stop=”Pause this shit” volslider=”y”]

Zankyou no Terror Extended 05

Commie :: Fancy seeing you here.
Are you playing hide and seek?
I’ll let you borrow this.
It gets lonely when you hide by yourself.
>U-Um, this is—
Promise me…
that you won’t let go of him until I say you can.

FFF :: What are you doing here?
Were you playing hide-and-seek?
I’ll lend you this.
Hiding by yourself can get pretty lonely.
>Um… this…
Promise me something.
That you’ll carry it with you until I say otherwise.

Kaylith :: What brings you to a place like this?
Playing a little hide-and-seek?
I’ll let you hold onto this.
It must get lonely, hiding all by yourself.
>Um, well…
Promise me something.
Don’t let go of him until I say so, okay?

NFP-IS :: What are you doing in a place like this?
Are you playing hide and seek?
I’ll let you borrow this.
Because it’s lonely hiding by yourself.
>U-Um, this is…
Promise me…
…that you won’t let go of him until I say you can.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

Expanded 6.

What a choice.

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Zankyou no Terror Extended 06

Commie :: Listen, you do one of two things.
You can make that building your grave,
or you can become an accomplice.

FFF :: Listen, you have two options.
Either you die where you stand,
or you become our accomplice.

Kaylith :: Listen. You have two options.
You can die where you stand,
or become our accomplice.

NFP-IS :: Listen, you have two options:
You can die where you are,
or become an accomplice.

risk Funi’s Engrish instead :: N/A. They all suck.

35 thoughts on “Translation Party: [Commie vs FFF vs Kaylith vs NFP-IS] Zankyou no Terror (Episode 01)”

  1. Overall scores…
    Commie: 4 times
    FFF: 3 times
    Kaylith: 4 times
    NFP-IS: 1 time
    It’s a tie between Commie and Kaylith

    Gonna call this one inconclusive. I watched FFF’s version first.

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  2. Overall scores…
    Commie: 8 times
    FFF: 0 times
    Kaylith: 3 times
    NFP-IS: 2 times
    Looks like your best bet is Commie

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  3. reverse-scored (i.e. i’ve picked the lines i definitely don’t want to see in the release i watch):
    Overall scores…
    Commie: 3 times
    FFF: 1 time
    Kaylith: 0 times
    NFP-IS: 2 times

    seems the safest choice is Kaylith

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  4. Overall scores…
    Commie: 4 times
    FFF: 4 times
    Kaylith: 6 times
    NFP-IS: 2 times
    Looks like your best bet is Kaylith.

    Though the lines I liked most were by FFF.

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  5. NFP-IS deserves to be instantly disqualified because they kept Funi’s horrible translation mistake in the most important line of the episode.

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          • Doesn’t it say exactly the same thing as the other lines, just more awkwardly?

            FFF :: It was on a hot summer day that I saw a smile as warm as the sun, and a gaze as cold as ice.

            =

            NFP-IS :: That was a smile like the sun… on a hot summer day… with eyes like ice.

            [On a hot summer day] [that was] [a smile like the sun] [with eyes like ice]

            The only thing missing is ‘warm’, but that hardly counts as a *horrible* mistake.

            (I haven’t seen the episode yet though.)

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            • No. The point of the scene is that she sees 12 with a warm smile and… some other dude with cold eyes. She’s directly commenting on each of them. NFP-IS makes it seem like there’s only one guy, which fucking ruins it.

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    • I cheated and clicked that one while choosing NA on the rest just to see whose it was to scratch them off my list without spoiling the other subs.

      I wouldn’t care if I chose all 12 of the others, I couldn’t watch their translation after that.

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  6. I found most of them acceptable, so I decided to just go by what ones I don’t.

    Essential only:
    Commie: 3 times
    FFF: 0 times
    Kaylith: 0 times
    NFP-IS: 4 times

    NFP-IS is horrible from what I can tell.

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  7. Overall scores…
    Commie: 1 time
    FFF: 1 time
    Kaylith: 3 times
    NFP-IS: 0 times
    Looks like your best bet is Kaylith

    I wasn’t actually planning on watching this show.

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  8. Commie: 0 times
    FFF: 3 times
    Kaylith: 9 times
    NFP-IS: 3 time
    Looks like your best bet is Kaylith

    Well, I guess I’ll go with Commie.

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  9. >Ya think she’ll eat in the john?
    Why Commie, why.

    Commie: 3 times
    FFF: 2 times
    Kaylith: 5 times
    NFP-IS: 4 times
    Looks like your best bet is Kaylith

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  10. Essential only:

    Overall scores…
    Commie: 3 times
    FFF: 4 times
    Kaylith: 5 times
    NFP-IS: 1 time
    Looks like your best bet is Kaylith

    Expanded:

    Overall scores…
    Commie: 4 times
    FFF: 8 times
    Kaylith: 8 times
    NFP-IS: 1 time
    It’s a tie between FFF and Kaylith

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  11. Commie: 3 times
    FFF: 3 times
    Kaylith: 6 times
    NFP-IS: 1 time
    Looks like your best bet is Kaylith.

    A resounding “Yes!” for Kaylith. As expected of Jing.

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  12. Overall scores…
    Commie: 5 times
    FFF: 3 times
    Kaylith: 6 times
    NFP-IS: 3 times
    Looks like your best bet is Kaylith

    ggwp Kaylith

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  13. Overall scores…
    Commie: 0 times
    FFF: 6 times
    Kaylith: 7 times
    NFP-IS: 0 times
    Looks like your best bet is Kaylith

    Well, that was interesting. Kaylith swept the essentials, and FFF the extended. ┐(´∀`)┌

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  14. Commie: 3 times
    FFF: 6 times
    Kaylith: 8 times
    NFP-IS: 0 times
    Looks like your best bet is Kaylith

    I’ve never really thought Kaylith was that impressive of a group, but they seem to be doing pretty good for themselves this season.

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  15. Overall scores…
    Commie: 2 times
    FFF: 4 times
    Kaylith: 3 times
    NFP-IS: 3 times
    Looks like your best bet is FFF

    There was almost always a line that I thought was clearly better than the others. I had hoped they’d be from the same group.
    This sucks :/

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  16. Overall scores…
    Commie: 1 time
    FFF: 1 time
    Kaylith: 1 time
    NFP-IS: 4 times
    Looks like your best bet is NFP-IS

    Essential 6 was so long… So I am guess that NFP-IS is the least edited of the funi-edits?

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  17. Overall scores…
    Commie: 2 times
    FFF: 1 time
    Kaylith: 0 times
    NFP-IS: 0 times
    Looks like your best bet is Commie

    Can’t say I’m a fan of how a majority of these lines were written…

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  18. Overall scores…
    Commie: 5 times
    FFF: 7 times
    Kaylith: 4 times
    NFP-IS: 5 times
    Looks like your best bet is FFF

    FFF saves this anime with speed and pretty good visuals.

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  19. Overall scores…
    Commie: 3 times
    FFF: 3 times
    Kaylith: 4 times
    NFP-IS: 3 times
    Looks like your best bet is Kaylith

    Didn’t like Kaylith’s plays with 12’s dialogues.
    The raw as a bit blurry, too. Maybe the source, cause FFF had the same blur and also had the same source.

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  20. “Overall scores…
    Commie: 2 times
    FFF: 3 times
    Kaylith: 1 time
    NFP-IS: 1 time
    Looks like your best bet is FFF.”

    Just the essentials, not sure if I’m going to watch this yet :/

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