Fansub Review: [Doki] 30-sai no Hoken Taiiku (Episode 01)

B-Tier, Fansub Review — By on April 8, 2011 8:42 pm

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I didn’t expect the show to be a gag-based comedy. I was hoping for actual advice on how to get laid… The show’s 12 minutes long, by the way.

They kara’d the OP, but didn’t TL the ED.

This is a consistent theme of failure. “I’m God” vs. “I’m a God”. The vast majority of the “god” references in this show should be in lowercase. And believe me, they’re used a lot.

So you finally turn 30 and all this nonsense happens to you, huh?

Less literal, more sensical. I hope sensical’s a word, cuz I’m not looking it up to see if it is.

30-year-old


These lines should really be combined.

No, not in. He said with.

Overall grade: B

It is what it is.

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7 Comments

Kal says:

>The comma is not necessary.

Is it not a conjunction?

Dark_Sage says:

Commas aren’t always required for conjunctions.

“I ate pizza and cake.”

“and” is a conjunction and requires no comma.

Kal says:

It is needed for coordinating conjunctions between two main clauses, hence it is different from your example of “I ate pizza and cake.”

Dark_Sage says:

Okay, Holo convinced me otherwise. You’re right, but the line still sucks so I just decided to rephrase it.

Thanks for pointing that out.

ano says:

Just wanted to point out your “write” should be “right”. Can’t believe you got that wrong.

Dark_Sage says:

I don’t QC my posts. :S

holo says:

Breasts is justice is intentional engrish. The katakana says that in the background.

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