Ya know, guys, I like the clever group name on this. Much kawaiier than most joint names.
I liked the OP kara, but the ED seemed like a cop-out.
Typesetting. It varies from great to egh.
Did something happen between those two in the past?
Either “If you mean Ayano,” or “If you’re talking about Ayano,”
now that you mention it.
The hell’s junior school? You mean junior high school?
“The feelings of athletes, the feelings of pitchers” is NOT an independent clause. Drop that semicolon! I’d personally go with ellipses here instead.
If you wanna use “them”, then make it “outputs”.
Overall grade: B+
If I had one thing to say to the Frozy editors, it would be to cut back on the idioms. The amount of them you use feels forced. Better than gg, I guess.