Better than the last entrant, at least.
These are all questions. They need question marks. Why the fuck don’t editors ever realize this simple fact.
Brits love their royals. Maybe we should have them teach the rules for this.
It’s Your Majesty, not “your majesty”.
alright -> all right
How many times am I gonna have to go over this? Fuck, I better write those editing guidelines soon. I can’t take much more of this shit.
with a thousand
This scene should be in the past tense.
You were a great puppet.
Unnecessary wapanese subtitles no Jutsu
Yes, we’re all so proud you guys know the kanji for “Kage Bunshin no Jutsu”. Why not astound us all and do this for the rest of the movie? Keep the actual translations at the top and put the Japanese at the bottom. That’d work great!
Overall grade: B-
Best option so far.