Let’s finish off the Oreshura reviews tonight.
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Release format: MKV (224 MB, 10-bit)
Japanesiness: No honorifics.
English style: American English.
Encoding details: http://pastebin.com/j43sHqqg
Speed: Quick (<48 hours)
Group website: http://commiesubs.com/
IRC channel: #[email protected]
SubCompare screenshot comparisons: http://www.subcompare.com/ore_no_kanojo_to_osananajimi_ga_shuraba_sugiru/
Opening. This kara is an abortion of color. Goddamn. I don’t understand why Commie used half the colors they did, nor do I want to. It’s like an orgasm of retarded excess.
Ending. This would be a lot more enjoyable if I could read it.
Looks like they’re still going with the non-joke “Maiden Recreation Club” even though by now they should know the name is supposed to be a play on words.
Oh my Jesus gods, this typesetting is terrible.
The show is more enjoyable when Commie doesn’t try than when they do.
Speaking of bad, holy shit.
I didn’t really like the typesetting in this release, but I assume that’s because the guy on it is new to the whole thing. I may not give pity points, but I will give a pointer: ask for advice from your fansubros when you need it. Most of these issues could have been dealt with if you had someone helping you out.
Maybe you should check for consistency before you release.
Those last two screens need to phrased similarly.
“She run out on you?”
This doesn’t fit. In Japanese there are three syllable she says. So if you’re going to be all cute with your font and phase in the syllables as she says a syllable, it better fucking match. “ivities” is not a syllable.
“Club project.” Three syllables, fits the intent. You’re good to go.
This is terrible. What the shit?
You’re confusing purpose.
It’s not that she can’t buy a complete set of JoJo’s — it’s that the club doesn’t have enough funds for it. She could certainly purchase it on her own (because she’s got mad money).
I cannot -> We cannot
“I can’t believe something could shake her this badly.”
“I’m a third-year middle schooler at the Nenaka Private Academy for Girls.”
get -> got
This isn’t hard. Maybe you should hire native English speakers to edit your scripts.
round and around and around and around we go~
Really? Him yelling at her would be as effective as signing to a blind person that they need to get their sight checked.
“Hey, she’s drowning!”
“I know what it looks like,”
“but this is only CPR — we’re not kissing.”
Try “Is love all you guys can think about?”
You cannot be fucking serious.
“A-Anyway, it’s not like CPR counts as a kiss.”
This entire CPR thing was fucked up by Commie, Oni, and rori. Mezashite was the only one to get it right. I honestly have no clue how three groups could independently go full retard on this considering the intent here was so obvious.
You’re gonna want to capitalize the full title.
“Little Miss Chihuahua Burglar”
Visual grade: D+
Script grade: C+
Overall grade: C
I can’t recommend these subs when there are better choices around. Stick with rori.
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