You know the drill, let’s do this.
What kind of wagyu beef is it? It’s A5-quality wagyu beef.
Everyday is an adjective. You want “every day”.
Torik’s sense of smell surpasses that of police dogs.
Not complete. You don’t complete levels in this sense. Try “handle” or “take on”.
Why would the ownership of the tank be important? It’s irrelevant. He means “IGO tank”, not “IGO-owned tank”.
How can an ecosystem be eaten out by something?
Really? The word is wherever.
You can use “The” or “Said”, but not both! Personally, I’d prefer “That” here.
You realized what?
Overall grade: B
I guess they realized that it’s important to allow editors to actually edit. Sometimes the TL doesn’t always know best. :S