Yup, catching up on my review backlog.
OP/Typesetting. No ED this episode.
This is a question, so use a question mark. Also, learn to place lines ABOVE the scrolling text at the bottom.
Too long for the line.
“An eminent professor wants us to find his puppy, eh?”
Again, too long.
“It’s not like I have any worth.” works just fine.
“won’t you” means this sentence needs a question mark.
This line doesn’t make too much sense. If I had to guess, the meaning would be “Demons can hide their appearances at will!” which would additionally lend comedy, because he just got the disguise smacked right off his face.
Overall grade: B-
I think they mostly need to work on making lines that are readable within the given time. The ones I pointed out were only a few out of ~six. That’s not acceptable.
There were some extremely clever lines, though. I wanted to say I’d be sticking with IB’s, due to their portrayal of Azazel as a Mexican (why would they do this? fuck if I know, but the lulz are there), but with lines such as
“He’s right fucking there” (trust me, you had to be there for this one) or calling someone a “dung diablo”, they’ve solidly earned my recommendation.