So, this is like the female equivalent of Queen’s Blade, right? I don’t care. I’m hooked now. >_<
File size: 244 MB
Release format: MKV
Japanesiness: Honorifics. Japanese name order.
Karaoke. OP/Insert/ED. To put it bluntly, it’s not very good.
These two lines go together, so why did you capitalize “My”? Also, lol random rainbow words. YOU GUYS SO FUNNY
Newsflash: Randomly turning lines all rainbow-colored doesn’t make you cute. It doesn’t make you rebels. And it certainly doesn’t make your subs better. It just shows that you’re desperate attention whores with nary a talent for anything even approaching wit.
each other = two
one another = more than two
You might want to think about phrasing this into Class A/Class B/etc.
“Ittoki-kun is really kind.” or “Ittoki-kun really is kind.”
That’s how it’s phrased in spoken English.
Never use more than two of the same letter in a row. Notable exception: If it’s comically drawn-out, but even then we fansubbers use the ~ for that.
Hmm… > Hmmm… > Hmmmmmmm… > Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm…
Huh? I know they used “keyword” in English, but the line doesn’t have to look so… awkward, does it?
lol. I don’t think you know what idiosyncratic means.
But I do like that tune!
This is so far from good writing it’s like a Twilight fanfic written by JK Rowling.
“You’re satisfied with that?”(line 1) -> “I’m happy with that.”(line 2) XXX NO XXX
“You’re satisfied with that?” -> Fucking anything else, really. *** YES ***
Watchability: Quite watchable. … if you’re 12 and just love LOL RANDOM RAINBOWS.
Overall grade: B-
As a whole, the English is decent. If you can stand lolrainbows and shitty karaoke, you could probably handle their release. Too bad that NyanTaku is so slow. :/
This review was a lot more negative before I remembered that these guys actually had some decent releases in this season. Oh boy, you should’ve seen the things I had down before that~~