Finally, a good shoujo. (And Commie’s version of it isn’t half-bad.)
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Release format: MKV (282 MB, 10-bit)
Japanesiness: No honorifics.
English style: American English.
Encoding details: http://pastebin.com/fFEhM4xa
Speed: Quick (<48 hours)
Group website: http://commiesubs.com/
IRC channel: #[email protected]
SubCompare screenshot comparisons: http://www.subcompare.com/tonari_no_kaibutsu-kun
Commie’s fansub reviews: http://notredreviews.wordpress.com/autumn-2012-reviews/
OP. Only the OP airs this episode.
The translation here attaches itself to the credits and it… works. It works so well.
I’d have liked to seen this translated, even for just the title. But considering the quality of the other signs in this release, this isn’t a cause of much consternation.
I enjoyed herkz’s typesetting although I think it could use a bit more focus.
There’s nothing I particularly feel a need to bring up here.
Let’s get some fucking natural speech up in here. High school students aren’t going to whisper about scary people; they’re not ten years old. Try something like “They say he hangs out with a rough crowd.”
Considering Crunchyroll had this as well as Commie and FFF, I’m gonna consider this a legitimate translation. This is all resting on the assumption that those groups were competent and had a TLC check this to make sure it checked out.
Operating under that assumption, this line needs some help. “I rape you” doesn’t really follow the “Make one peep” part… at all.
“Make one peep and I’ll rape you.” is more reflective of human speech.
“imprinted sentiment” is not a thing. The translator just made this shit up.
“Y-You’re probably mistaking something else for what you think is love.”
You don’t “solve” questions; you answer them. Problems (among other things – like puzzles) are what you solve.
“I gave up on a problem I couldn’t solve.”
first-year class. Yes, “first-year” is an adjective modifying “class” here.
A few seconds of line placement could have moved the subs out of the way of the credits.
Watchability: Definitely watchable.
Visual grade: A
Script grade: B+
Overall grade: A-
Beyond a few necessary fixes, the only things Commie changed up with the script were:
1. Added plenty of cussing and slang (going to -> gonna).
– Bitch if you want, but this isn’t “wrong” per se. Don’t like it, don’t watch this release. FFF/Crunchyroll have less profanity.
2. Removed Crunchyroll’s double-spacing.
3. Removed honorifics.
Altogether, it was a very light edit and not one I feel is particularly worthy of praise. However, I’m not here to grade the amount of effort Commie’s editor put into the script. My concern is with the end result, and overall it was a good script. Combine that with excellent visuals (which are deserving of praise) and you have a tough combination to beat.