This is the most confusing show I’ve ever seen.
The OP was instrumental. The ED was a regular ED but it was not TL’d. So, uhh, no screenshots for y’all. I was told the ED will be in their v2. I’m assuming my suggestions will make it into their v2 as well?
That’s right. That stairway is Black Panty Shooter Ichikawa’s experimental grounds.
I’m not really a fan of “experimental grounds”, but I’m going with that because it sounds better.
This, quite frankly, did not make too much sense in the show.
Most people watching this are going to associate hentai with porn. How about you translate it to the context in which it’s used by the show?
I’m sorry Professor, but the submission date
That’s how you comma.
I’m tilting my head, still trying to make sense of this.
alright -> all right
It’s coming off the first scene, so the second line should be uncapped.
This is a question.
That you were wearing what? Oh, what. Yeah, maybe that’s the word you were looking for.
Overall grade: ?
Perhaps more important than the English errors I pointed out is the over brain rape I received from the show. I may just be stupid, but this shit confused me, hardcore. Grade is subject to change based on IB’s release of this show. If I get as confused there as I did here, I’ll take it to mean that I’m just stupid.
Also, this is another one of those 12-minute shows.
Edit: Like three people on Hina-Wasu’s staff have talked to me, mentioning that it was indeed a confusing script. Take my review with a grain of salt until you see my review for [IB], is about the best advice I can give.