Fansub Review: [Doki] Hidan no Aria (Episode 03)

B-Tier, Fansub Review — By on June 26, 2011 4:27 am

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Oh yeah, nearing the end of my backlog, just in time for the new season.

OP/ED

Typesetting.

She’s talking about the cat plushes. There are two of them. Ergo, “These are so cute!”

Is this really a bus hijacking?

You need to spruce this up. Make it First Butei Charter or perhaps even Butei Charter Number One. I prefer the former because it mimics the Constitution’s amendments here in the U.S., at least in terms of style (First Amendment, Second Amendment, etc.).

Nope.

O_0

I don’t have the abilities you think I do.

Not very good phrasing there, guys.

This line makes no sense in the episode. Maybe something like “So, you were sniping because…” would make it sensical.

-Kinji-san

+you

She’s talking directly to Kinji-san. You don’t have to be literal to the point of stupidity, Doki Editor.

Really? You can’t make this flow any better?

It’s not like I saved you because you’re special or anything.

Overall grade: B-

The general impression I had of this release was ._. but that might be just because the show sucks. I dunno.

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1 Comment

Jukey says:

>Kinji-san

lol at literal stupidity. Seeing it in this release http://www.nyaa.eu/?page=torrentinfo&tid=181781 made me rage. To be fair that was a troll, but I’m not sure they used a single second person pronoun in the entire thing.

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