So far, this is the release to go with for Mayo Chiki.
File size: 233 MB
Release format: MKV
Japanesiness: Honorifics. Japanese name order.
Karaoke. Kinda sucked.
Okay, in these contexts, “Gramps”, “Brother”, and “Milady” should all be capitalized. Why? Because they’re proper nouns when these titles are being used in place of people’s names. In fact, every time Butler-kun says “Milady”, it should be capitalized.
There’s no reason to make it “She’s left” instead of “She left”.
This line is too long for the time it was given.
Shoulda TL’d it as cyborg or something else. “Artificial human” makes no sense.
She’s talking past tense here.
“I didn’t think I’d be raped by someone who only had one hand free.”
Three sentences in a row start with “But”. That’s shit writing.
This doesn’t read very well.
Yeah, I think someone fucked up something with this line.
“My curse” implies he’s willingly accepting ownership of the curse. This is not the case.
Overall grade: B-
Good release, WhyNot. Far better than Ayako/Chiki’s releases.
BTW, I really liked the clever phrasing.
“You almost made me see Gramps in heaven!” “So, you’re saying it was heavenly?”
“A clean ending for a disgusting pervert.”
“You can rope her or even grope her.”
Whoever’s responsible for those lines (among others) deserves a firm handshake and a smile lasting a duration no longer than three seconds.