I know you don’t have a choice in whose subs to watch for this, but I wanted to watch the episode, so I’m gonna review it, god dammit!
BTW, kliq’s one of my staff in Whine-Subs, so I’m going to be a bit harsh on him for his role in this release.
File size: 197 MB (LQ MKV), 315 MB (HQ MKV)
Karaoke. It exists. The ED’s much better than the OP.
Typesetting. It’s FFFpeeps. You can expect decent typesetting.
On second thought, I guess shouldn’t have expected too much of you guys. :(
Antique item? Just call it an antique.
Accents are important, but they mustn’t get in the way of readability. Add an extra space after “course” to separate the words.
No, kliq. This isn’t poetic language. When you’re using semicolons in regular conversation, you better fucking get it right. You consistently get it wrong by linking clauses that aren’t independent.
You know what, kliq? New rule. You can’t use semicolons until you learn how to use them properly. Consider this training. It’s for your own good. >_<
See, this is where you’d use a semicolon. Each line is an independent clause.The two lines are quite related to each other, so they’re perfect candidates for a semicolon. Using a semicolon followed immediately by a conjunction (like you did later in the episode) is not cool and makes me want to hire a hairy man to rape your eyes out at night. Like, literally, rape them out. Skullfucking, I mean.
Well, that’s odd; the cherry blossoms are late to bloom this year. ~= Well, that’s odd. The cherry blossoms are late to bloom this year.
Honestly, I wouldn’t even use a semicolon here. Why? Because semicolons suck.
The hell’s “bloom prediction”? (Okay, I can figure it out from the context, but it sounds terrible.)
Nooooooo! Goddamn newfag editors with their goddamn inability to pronoun. Fucking…
“Albeit”? You… can’t use albeit in this situation. You actually only need the “I’m actually glad it fell under.” part of the sentence.
I think you mean “leaf”.
Actually, she said “Yuzu-san” here. There’s quite a big difference.
Watchability: Quite watchable. So much text/typesetting means you won’t have time to dwell on any mistakes.
Overall grade: B-
The script was difficult, but the errors were difficult to bear. Still, I’ll give it a B-.
Also, thanks kliq. This release gave me a migraine. Gonna try to sleep it off now. :/