Two good releases of A-Channel, eh? Lucky, lucky for A-Channel fans~
No comma there.
“Aren’t they?” or if you wanna go totally valley girl “I know, right?”
“I was just caught in the habit from when I was a freshman.”
Really, a lot of phrases would work here. The line’s just really awkward.
You’ll look like an idiot if you hurt yourself with a piece of candy.
“I told you so.” or “I knew this would happen.”
If Run is intended to be following up the question directly, she should say “What are those again?”
If Run is intended to not be paying attention to the question, she should say “What’re you talking about?”
Or you know, something similar. Gist is that the second line’s a bit off.
What she means is “Hey, you know some things that I didn’t expect you would.”
But my brain’s dead right now and that’s probably too long. Solution should be simple, but I’m durr. Free glomps to the first person who makes a good suggestion~
Overall grade: B+ (a high one)
Great job from Doki. I thought EveTaku had this in the bag, but I guess the competition’s fiercer than expected.
If I had to choose between Doki and EveTaku, I’d have to give the nod to Doki. They didn’t have as many things that I’d want to change in terms of the English. Additionally, they have the advantage of fansub experience whereas EveTaku are newcomers to the field. But it’s hard to differentiate considering both groups had good releases. You’d be fine either way.