Okay, we’re getting into the category of watchable now.
Unlike U-C and Mazui, this group has the marked status of actually being understandable. This release makes sense, even if the English isn’t all that great.
That line with that picture would imply he is unable to tell the difference between the man in the picture and the female. The real idea is closer to “How am I supposed to know who you are?” or something similar. Leaving it intentionally vague like that means the reader will undoubtedly connect it to the most logical possibility – that he doesn’t know if she’ll look different from how she does in the picture.
We got some tense issues, a line in need of a TL note, and a confusing premise… “It’s a description for if someone like me” <- ?!
I’d be very, very wary of this line. I’d ask for a TL clarification, because based on what I’ve seen, this doesn’t appear to be the meaning behind the line.
Take out “that of”. It serves no purpose.
No need for “just” here.
The tenses don’t match. Go with “try, I”.
When I try my best to buy super-discounted items on sale at the supermarket, I get such weird looks.
“no?” Hmmm… is this commonly used in British English or something? I’m not inclined to mark it wrong, as I’m a bit confused, but this is not used at all over here.
This line sucks for everyone.
More like mother-daughter.
Replace “the next day” with “tomorrow”
The cosmos is
“The cosmos” is singular.
“points of speech”? Eh?
Not everyone watches Crayon Shin-chan. How about a TL note if you’re gonna leave the joke?
No. He ate her pizza, so she’s not allowed dinner. That’s what she just fucking said. Logic fail.
Yeah “Cousin” is being used properly here. My problem is with “proper developed assessment abilities”. It should be “properly-developed assessment abilities”.
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It’d be more like bow to, but I don’t like this line. How about “Is that so? I admire your professionalism.” ?
I am… I am…!
… an alien!
It doesn’t need to be styled like that, but there is an interruption and she does finish her sentence, so I think this styling is valid.
Keep alien in lowercase.
in order to create
Also, you can probably drop “on Earth”. I think that’s already implied.
Overall grade: B-
Yes, there were a lot of errors, but their subs didn’t confuse me when I watched them. That’s what really matters in the end. U-C and Mazui both failed in that regard. Therefore, I recommend Doki over the other two.
I’d say these guys are the release to get for the show, but I’m in GotWoot and we have a naisu release coming out for the show.