Chibi gets it. She’s asked me to do this review like four times. So rather than reading some manga and falling asleep like I’d planned, I decided to do this review instead.
File size: 264 MB (LQ MKV), 475 MB (HQ MKV)
Japanesiness: Honorifics. Japanese name order. Muttsurini is kept as Muttsurini.
Karaoke. Kind of… obnoxious, which isn’t all that great of a trait in karaoke.
Typesetting. As a shitty editor myself, I don’t really bother editing typesetting… but for a show like this, you may wanna check out the lines before you paste them everywhere. I’m not really gonna call the fail that I saw out because I think errors in the actual script are more noticeable and relevant, but it’s something to keep in mind.
It’s been consistently localized as the River Styx throughout history, and even in your typesetting.
This isn’t one of the more egregious examples of what I’m about to talk about, but it is the point where I got fed up (2 minutes, 43 seconds in).
You don’t need ellipses in every fucking sentence. In fact, ellipses should be relatively rare. Every four lines in this release has an ellipsis. No, I’m not even fucking joking. There are 83 ellipses in this release, not counting the OP/ED/signs. There are 352 lines of dialogue. 83/352=way more than there fucking should be.
More like “They’ve probably got”
“about your feelings” is redundant. Drop it.
lol, nice English.
These words don’t match up at all. Choose improper or impure and stick with it.
Good gods, I have no clue what possesses people to do this. No, adding arbitrary amounts of exclamation marks does not make you a good editor, nor does it make your subs watchable. It just makes me think you’re an attention-deficit moron.
Perhaps you meant “you’re”.
Watchability: Watchable. You really don’t have time to overanalyze each line as the text comes in and out so quickly.
Overall grade: B
I’m far more inclined to be nicer with my critiques of scripts on this show. It’s an editing hell that I’m glad I don’t have to take part in. With all respect to this joint though, FFFpeeps put together a more competent release with what I saw of their episode 1. I’d still recommend FFFpeeps as the go-to group on this show.
There you go, Chibi. May I sleep now?