Although they had more errors, I think I’d rather watch gg’s release of No. 6 than Doki’s.
Edit: Apparently, they dropped it. But fuck that. I’m not deleting this review just because of that. Just pretend that they didn’t, so as to humor me. Okay?
File size: 368 MB
Release format: MKV
Japanesiness: No honorifics.
Font: Kinda shit. Looks like Arial Bold or something.
Karaoke. In most releases, this would be pathetic. But it works for the songs in the OP/ED here.
Typesetting. The only part that needed it.
gg has a definite problem with question marks. Why so loathe to use them?
Annoying comma splices.
He says this in response to “Have you no shame”. Not quite a sensical reply in this context.
“I thought we should match, but since you’re ‘Shion’… and ‘Shion’ is a lilac flower.”
That line makes absolutely no sense. And yes, that train of thought ends right there. No more lines to clarify what the fuck’s going on.
If the idea here is that he’s expressing amazement at how good Mouse is, then the line should be “You sure know what you’re doing!”
Why? Because the first time I read the line, it was nonsense to me. The “sure” helps people understand the point of the sentence.
What is it, Mom?
Pretty simple capitalization mistake. :/
“Them”? He’s referring to Mouse’s name. A name is singular.
Capitalize both words.
He didn’t even extend the word that long. ._.
Overall grade: B-
Who cares? gg dropped it. I will note that I found their lines easier to understand as a whole than Doki’s were.