B-teams make for C-tiers.
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Release format: MKV (412 MB, 10-bit)
Japanesiness: No honorifics.
English style: American English.
Encoding details: http://pastebin.com/xwnBj1by
Speed: Quick (<48 hours)
Translation style: Crunchy edit.
Opening. The colors match. …sorta. And the font, well… uhh, it is indeed a font.
I hope the KFXer was just lazy, cuz if they actually thought this karaoke was good, it doesn’t speak well for their mental health.
Ending. Like the OP, the colors match… but the font doesn’t. It’s all so soulless.
Probably because “group combat” is some jank transliteration.
“This is Incursio, an Imperial Relic.”
Hey Youtube fandubbers, no need to make your own “ironically” awful scripts for this show; Vivid-Asenshi will do that for you. Enjoy your impending e-popularity.
The Magnificent Steiner gets off on death, you fuckwits. Can’t you fucking innuendo?
“That kind of danger gives me all the charge I need!”
Except she just killed that guy. Sorta different from a playground scuffle.
Thoughts without thought.
His first two lines are supposed to tie into the third. As-is, nothing fits.
“Is that so?”
Seele may be a bit off, but I don’t think she has an ESL speech impediment.
She didn’t shoot him; she shot at him. It’s the difference between succeeding and failing, not that V-A would know much about the former.
I assure you, varied language makes for a better script.
“I’m not sure what you mean, but okay!”
“That’s just the reality here.”/”That’s just how it is here.”
She’s saying that’s how it is in the capital, not everywhere.
The current young emperor? Do tell what other young emperors the empire recently had, Vivid-Asenshi.
“His plotting ensured that the child now on the throne won the battle for succession.”
Hmm, what words could be used to describe a scheming, plotting prime minister? What would get across his conniving, Machiavellian ways?
Nope, can’t think of anything other than crafty. Good writing,
- The cries of your people = your people’s cries
- The cries of your peoples = your peoples’ cries
Don’t cry, V-A. I’m sure you’ll get the coin flip right next time.
“Yeah, it’s called Pumpkin.”
We already know it’s an Imperial Relic. Why are you repeating yourself?
People aren’t bystanders until an event happens that they had nothing to do with, but were there to witness.
“He’s surrounded by a whole lot of other people, though.”
It’s the only route we were shown.
other route -> escape route
I suppose if there aren’t any other ministers in the country, this line could work. Wonder where they all went…
Oh yeah, they aren’t in this release cuz Vivid-Asenshi think government ministers should be called officials. Sure gets the importance of their positions across.
Please become an heroes.
Visual grade: C
Script grade: C-
Overall grade: C-
Either the Vivid-Asenshi joint consists primarily of incompetents, or the Crunchyroll script is nigh-unsalvageable garbage. I wonder which one their excuse will be.