File size: 282 MB
Release format: MKV
Japanesiness: Japanese name order. Honorifics. Use of the third-person when the characters use it.
Noticeably absent: Miraku-run’s transformation phrase. You could just make something up. People can’t tell if the Japanese is correct and if it’s cool enough, they won’t care. Here’s one I came up with: “Through the stars and through the skies. Into your heart, Miraku-run flies!” Bam!
Chapters: None? Honestly, am I gonna have to make a tutorial to teach people how to fansub?
Typesetting. There are a few notable signs that aren’t -ahem- “typeset”.
While -> Though
I… no. Why would you capitalize that? For the apologists, this is the only time it was capitalized in the episode. Confounding.
No, fuck this. I’m sick of shitty editing. If there is a vocal inflection that would appear were you to actually speak the line, you better fucking put it in. The emphasis is necessary here.
“Putting that aside, we really are going to be late.”
since we were last inside
I’ll let these stand by themselves. ~_~
This is not a sentence in and of itself. While malformed sentences are sometimes acceptable in subtitles to reflect natural speech more accurately, in this case it doesn’t work out… at all.
Most comma splicing is innocuous. Here, though? Well, if you can handle these (especially the second one), you can probably handle anything.
Ever since I started drawing doujins, I haven’t found anything more fun than drawing Miraku-run!
Uhh, you don’t really abolish clubs. Try “disbanded” here.
Also, it’s = it is; its = ownership
A “crushing” introduction? The hell? Did these guys just pull random words from a dictionary? Also, it’s self-introduction.
This is a hideous way to introduce a second line. And why is there a dash on the top one?
This line is salvageable, but I think we should scrap the editor.
This comes off a comma and should therefore not be capitalized.
Say something, Chinatsu-chan!
I wonder what the world would be like if people could use question marks properly?
They’re referring to an event that may occur, thus “that” should be used instead of “this”.
Overall grade: D
If you can deal with no karaoke, bad English, and poor typesetting, then why the fuck are you on this site? I wouldn’t say this release isn’t worth watching (don’t deprive yourself of an anime just because the subs are terrible), but I would suggest waiting a bit to see if any decent group will pick it up.